Lifeblood and Stone

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Sometimes literary brevity can be a blessing.

“Lifeblood and Stone” is Breena Wilde’s very short – as in only 15 pages – introduction to her Moth Society series. In this entry, we meet Michael Lifeblood, one of the governing partners of the law firm, Lifeblood and Stone. We also meet Amanda, who is a fast-rising attorney in Lifeblood’s firm. It is Amanda’s POV through which we experience the events that unfold.

These events take place over two scenes, one of which serves to place the characters at the law firm’s annual Halloween masquerade ball. This section is very well written and sets the stage perfectly. The other scene is for Lifeblood and Amanda’s sexual encounter, or should I say, “encounters.” And this section is written about as poorly as I have seen in some years.

In this second scene, Wilde pens four separate and different sexual interactions within a span of approximately 10 pages. And each is graphically and luridly described with gutter-level verbiage.

Now, I am no prude. I possess a few favorite expressions of my own. I also feel that erotic scenes that are well placed in a story arc can be both a delight and good transition points. But this was overkill, too much in too little space, and it came across as oily, smarmy and dirty rather than hot and steamy.

Now, before I ever started the short, I knew the genre was listed as paranormal erotica and the promotional blurb included a maturity warning. But, frankly, by the time I got to the paranormal part – and the name “Lifeblood” is a big clue here – I felt I needed to wash my brain out with soap.

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Designs of Desire

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James Bryant is an artist, an oils and acrylics painter, who is working as a graphics designer in order to be fiscally responsible. His faith in his talent as a painter, making his living by selling his art through galleries, has been literally beaten out of him by his previous domestic partner.

James Bryant is openly gay and has been the target of both physical and psychological abuse since his teens. His parents began the psychological abuse upon discovering his sexual orientation and his brother, along with several of the brother’s friends, initiated and perpetuated the physical abuse.

James also has a degenerative joint disease that made it impossible for him to defend himself physically from those attacks, which included being held down, beaten and raped. Even into his college years and beyond, the attacks were frequent and merciless, putting James into the hospital on several occasions.

As often occurs in abuse situations, James never reported any incidents that occurred after the first rape when he realized that his parents held him to blame for it all and would not help him press charges. And again, as often occurs in abuse situations, James did not extricate himself from the cycle of abuse until his domestic partner stepped over that final line and took away his ability to walk without crutches.

Enter Seth Burns, the openly gay CEO of Carrington Enterprises, a hotel and restaurant conglomerate, who has contracted with James’ firm for a branding design to be used with a new chain the firm is building. James is assigned as the designer for the project. Their attraction to each other is immediate and Seth takes James to the construction site to get design ideas. Unknown to Seth, one of the construction crews’ foremen is the man who put James on crutches. When James encounters Victor at the site, he goes into a full fledge panic attack and flees the scene, Seth hot on his hells.

At this point the two main story lines emerge. First is the relationship between James and Seth. Second is the psychological growth of the abused soul past and beyond the abuse.

Before our story reaches its most satisfying conclusion, O’Riley will have tested the patience and character of both James and Seth in several high-impact situations. She will use Seth to demonstrate the difference between a dominant and a bully, between being dominant and being domineering, and between consent and abuse. She will also use Seth to bring out the point that BDSM practices are about mutual pleasures and that practicing elements of that lifestyle does not imply or require pain or injury.

O’Riley will use James to illustrate the fact that everything in this world does not always revolve around oneself. Through James, O’Riley helps the other characters to learn that sometimes putting another’s problems ahead of one’s own and being selfless instead of selfish will yield results that are more truthful and satisfying than those achieved by pushing. And O’Riley will use James to advance one of the most important psychological principles in the book: the family of the one’s heart is just as real, and sometimes more cohesive and loving, as the family of one’s blood.

Two other elements of this book are just as impressive as the psychological import of the storyline. One is the writing of the sexual encounters and the other is the book’s cover. Today’s current phrasing for well-written sex scenes is “hot and steamy.” They are all of that and more. They show consideration and caring. They never feel gratuitously included, but are naturally placed within the story line. And they are written as coming from the heart as well as from desire. My only complaint here is that the author makes the prose of James’ internal monologues during the scenes too flowery and verbose.

As for the book’s cover, rarely do I comment on a cover in a review, but this cover merits an exception. It is, put simply, beautiful. Each element in the cover supports a major concept in the book – the brush representing James’ talent, the hand rings representing his illness, the side and facing profiles representing the relationship between James and Seth, and the soft batik coloration representing the blending of all into a cohesive unit.

Throughout the novel, it is apparent that, as a debut author, O’Riley is serious about her craft. The scenes seem to flow together effortlessly. That and the lack of significant errata indicate the presence of a good editor. It is also clear that O’Riley has done her research into the dynamics of physical and emotional abuse. Throughout the story, James’ responses to perceived and actual threats are right on the money. And O’Riley has left a door open to a second related book or even a trilogy, using the supporting characters of Chase and Rhys. For a debut novel, this is a finely written specimen.

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Beauty Touched the Beast

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This is an erotic short story, very short in that it takes less than 15 minutes to read. It is also the first of four short stories in the Beauty series that deal with events in the relationship of Erin and Blake, a college student and an older man, burned during his military service. Hence the title of “Beauty Touched the Beast.”

While it may be erotica, it is not a story of two characters who have a short, sex-filled one-night stand. These are not two ships passing in the night, so to speak. They have a business relationship of several months standing. Thus the author is able to establish friendship and caring as a prelude to the passion.

So while there is little time or space in this story to have character development, there is ample time and space to establish honor and emotion between the characters.

There are a few places where the paragraphs don’t flow naturally from one to the next and there are some punctuation errors that made me have to re-read several passages. Overall, though, the story can be taken as a complete event; there is no cliffhanger.